Second Peer Response

Adam, you don't have your articles, but your 5 paragraph essay is really nice. You answered all of the questions thoroughly and you know what you are talking about. Something I suggest is spell check, because you had spelling errors. You could also try to use more resources other than vikings.com, such as magazines or other websites. You could also add more pictures to your blog to catch the reader's eye easier. Other than that, nice color scheme, and nice job on the essay that you already have.

Adam, it is obvious that you still have A LOT of work to do to get caught up. Your 5 paragraphs were well thought out, and it seems that you have a lot of background information, on the topic. I would suggest maybe trying to do some research on some of the individual players, like Brett Favre or Adrian Peterson. This might let you get a little more information onto that blog. Maybe some pictures would liven it up a bit too.

Second Peer Blog Response

Adam nice five paragraphs. I like the topic you have chosen I think it will be easy to find information on this topic. I do think you should do some research so you can make some posts on your blog. Like you said you could go to a game and use that for information and I bet it would be fun. So you should focus on this blog a little more and get some information in there. I also think you could add some pictures to your blog to catch the readers eye.